Where are my posts . . .
Dr Maggard is not the problem. Quite frankly I’m a bit surprised he is still here and hasn’t left for a better job yet.
This press release is really easy to fix. The problem? No context for anything.
Something like "the design/build process has had these challenges (re-design, budget cuts, inflation, etc, fill in the blank), but the team is working hard to overcome these issues."...this is to explain why we are here.
But then the big one...there is NO CALL TO ACTION. There has never been.
All you have to do is throw a sentence at the bottom that says something like "Success and timing of this project is dependent in a large part on donors like you. Help us achieve our goals by donating to the RCAF."
It's a freakin sentence and we don't even type it.
That would be step 1 in about 100 things that could be done.
Tinfoil hat time: what if athletics doesn’t even want to push for RCAF donations if the university can just grab from the pot.
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